Friday, January 22, 2016

    When I was younger i used to race I used to race and I enjoyed this activity very much.  The way I started was my father saw an add in the newspaper for a midget and it was a race car.  My father saw that and our family being as involved in racing as we were already he asked me if I wanted to be a race car driver. I shouted back in excitement ''YES!!!'' and that is how I started my racing career.  I enjoyed racing a lot it made some great memories for me to look back on and that I will never forget.  There was only one drawback to racing and that is I missed a lot of school and when I stopped racing I lost a lot of friends I would never see again.  But although I lost a bunch of friends when I stopped the memories were worth it and made me happy.

5 comments:

  1. It awesome that you race, you repeated some words in your first sentence. But all in all, great story

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  2. You did not capitalize one of the "I" in the first sentence. But, great story all together!

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  3. I enjoyed your story and can tell you really liked racing. There are a few sentences that seem to be run-ons, and could maybe use a comma or period. Overall, it was a great story.

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  4. A few grammar mistakes other than that great story. It sucks that you had to stop but it seems like you made the right choice.

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  5. A few grammar mistakes other than that great story. It sucks that you had to stop but it seems like you made the right choice.

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